Tv Ident Final Piece

here's the final tv ident, unfortunately the level of detail in the modelling isnt there so for me the 1st 3 seconds are a bit of a failure but as i think i mentioned before, id not modelled before so there was a kinda huge chunk of trial and error. I still think the idea could work but over all im really happy with the last 4 seconds of the logo - wish i could just hand that bit in!!